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Chris Tharp's avatar

I understand why this piece doesn't work because the first half is a meditation on a place and the second half is a story: it's basically two things but somehow I think if you are willing to commit and read along, it makes sense.

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Skylar Renslow's avatar

nah I'm with you though the whole piece. Plot twist at the end! I don't know what I was expecting, but that was not it haha

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